Impressive

This is exactly what the flash portal needs more of. Great choice in music by the way.

The animation could be better which is why it doesn't get a 10 from me, but I REALLY like the ideas brought forth by the short. Great job!

I'm not sure if you should even make a sequel, maybe just other super simple things like this, it's wonderful.

There is just little enough character development for you to not have characters but ideas here, if you get what I mean.

Keep it up!

-TWM

PS No joke, once you get very good at animating too, you could make some amazing things.

Thank you.

Thank you sir, for making my day better. I will cherish this FOREVER.

Should do another one some time. Just a thought. Very good idea.

Truly Heartfelt

This flash...this music, it explicitly portrays " that not all truth could be deduced from axioms, that there were inescapable realities in the world which could only be reached through emotion, feeling and intuition". (-Anonymous-).

The fact that this flash-music combo portrayed such a wide variety of emotion, intuition, and the eternal (and internal) subconcious thought processes and meanings to life that we form in our head...

The fact that you managed to complete the cycle and form and endless loop..was just awe-inspiring. The thought that while when the composer was sucessful he was happy for a while, he only found a final, true happiness when he managed to find another boy, not unlike him, that he was sure would beging this cycle again, and pray that one day that boy may countinue the cycle for yet another..very lovely thoughts indeed.

I also like the fact that "The Composer" remained nameless and that he was just a nobody one day, celebrity the next, and a nobody again the day after that...

Thanks for submitting this flash AND song! I will remember it for a long time, it was truely wonderful!

Sincerely,
~TheWisestMagi~

Ahh

That was cool.

The bats are rediculous because your web is so full of crap by the time they get there you can hardly keepp up with all of the stuff, I thought I had it made with my stratagy but I wasnt quick enough once there were like 4 humming birds...I think maybe its better NOT to cover the entire area..then my whole web came down at once, leaving me with only enough wbbing for a corncer..which a bat hit.

Cool Idea for a game though,
~TheWisestMagi~

P.S. To anyone wondering what a good stratagy is, MAKE A GRID. (With only horizontal and vertical lines).

I have been listening to this for about 4 years as study music (looped). Just wanted to thank you.

Gloine

Gloine wins again. Exceptids lyrics and flow are simply second rate in comparison. Also, the voice is cool, but it feels like he's using it not just to separate himself, but it's overly intense for his lyrics. The best part of his lyrics is the part is where he claims Gloine's nasty lyrics are actually a catastrophe. Gloine still wins hard though.

Incredible!

This is fantastic, sir. I rather enjoyed every bit of the composition, and your performance was certainly not sub par, so quit being humble ;P.

My only suggestion to make this a bit more interesting is to have a part somewhere that is perhaps even in a different key (but still a spanish scale setup) and play a little salsa-y** part that has more full chord playing in it and a nice little groove to create a kind of "dancing loving romantic exciting sexual" feel in the song. It would make it feel more complete to me.. Seems like you hit much of romance except for this :).

Hopefully that helps you as far as composing goes! I am not a guitarist so I cannot judge that, but it looks like you don't want me to anyway.

**Salsa-y is maybe not what I'm looking for, as that change may be too dramatic, but I hope you kind of know what I mean. Perhaps I meant more Rumba?

Excellent!

Yes yes yes. Very nice. You can tell not only where the sun is, but where the road dips up ahead the trees on the left side light up again. Very nice use of colors and shading here. This is beautiful. I kind of feel like I'm actually here (Which is very strange for this type of art).

To the guy two under me: Just because cold is a lack of energy, it doesn't make it any less sensible. Pure darkness is equally blinding to pure light...etc. I do not believe that this is an example of naive art.

Blue Dog

Is it odd for me to say that your animal portraits remind me of blue dog? Being a current Baton Rouge-ian myself, I can't help but to feel that you have visited New Orleans more than once. Your art reminds me of something that I would see there (specifically).

Great

Great piece of art. It's kind of just a small nitpick, but I would like the clouds to be just a tad more visible. Just to me at least. Not much mind you, but just a touch..